I decided to change the above card and this is what I came up. I was much happier with the second card.
Stamps: Feel goods and From My HeartInk: Primrose Petals, Basic Grey and Stazon Black
Cardstock: Primrose Petals, Very Vanilla, Basic Grey, So Saffron, Pink Pirouette and Vellum
Ribbon: 1 1/4" (3.2 cm) Two-Tone Ribbon in Basic Grey/Basic Black / Pink/Rose Red and 5/8" (1.6cm) Flower Trim
Big Shot: Textured Embossing Folder Honeycomb, Finishing Touches Edgelits and Apothecary Accents Framelits
Punches: Elegant Butterfly
Embellishments: Pearls and Essentials Paper Piercing Pack
DSP: First Edition Speciality